October 29th, 2008
Page 1.01

1st comic page. The comic that launched a thousand ships? Most likely not, but it looks decent.

Jeff: Needs more trees and scribbled lines of wear and tear though to get the “decent” comment imo, but I’m a perfectionist. As background to the page, this went through a few iterations and rewrites with Red as it was too long for a front page and also to focus on what in the frames available. Thankfully came through in the end with the final shading and bubble text by Pix.

2 Comments...

  1. bookkeeping services

    If Helen of Troy had a face that launched a thousand ships, should a face with such beauty that could launch one ship be measured as a mil-Helen?How many ships could you launch?Thanks…for nice commitment hope u will continue…….

  2. That late guy

    I'm really late on finding this. I don't know a thing about this. First things first, I'll talk about the art. The interior backgrounds look rather nice, or at least better than mine. The outside could use work, it looks like there's some sort of light coming from the lake, I can't quite tell what it is, also the perspective on the dock is a bit wonky when compared to the house. I can't say a whole lot about the dialogue though. So far so good.